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8 quart crock pot2 years ago
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Final Project -::- Somniloquy16 years ago
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Dance Party Mix16 years ago
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music video16 years ago
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Video Journal #8 - Video Without Video16 years ago
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Yume (Dream)16 years ago
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Interacting feet16 years ago
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halloween16 years ago
9 comments:
Great idea, i didn't see anything to fix. Picking to go to an apple farm was a good idea because it fights with fall.
You have the makings on a nice video here, but there's some things holding it back. I really like the last shot and the closeup of the eating was nice. On the downside the voices in the background are distracting, some of the shots are a few frames too long, the pacing of the story is a too quick, and the negation effect is glaringly out of place. I think you can convey the horrible taste without using it. Not trying to tear you down; most of these are simple to fix and the result would be a much stronger video.
I liked the idea behind this one a lot. The shot of her picking the apple was really nice. And I liked the effect you used when she was biting into the bad one. The only thing I really didn't like was when she licked her lips before biting into the apple, I thought that was a little too much and not really needed. And then she was smiling, like she was about to laugh which took away from the rest of the video.
i really liked the idea but it seemed you were holding back just a little bit, great video nonetheless.
Nice variation of shots, although the one profile shot felt a bit long.
this was a really good idea. i liked the angles you used. I didnt see anything that i thought you should change..great job!
i liked it. i liked how you saw her close up eating the apple and that it reflected the change of season into fall
I like the idea behind the video, its a nice story line. I don't really understand the inversion shot though, it doesn't really make sense with the video. also i think that the last shot of the girl walking away would be nice if it were longer. more of her just walking away.
i thought it was a really creative idea. I like how you used the negative effect to signify that it was a bad apple
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